Tuesday, February 12, 2013

FOURTH PERIOD BQ REVISIONS

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  1. Linda Nguyen
    BQ2-The Protagonist
    The protagonist of my novel is Gaia. Gaia,a 16 year old midwife,is a brave and loyal person.In the book,she chose to stay in Enclave to find her parents,who were taken away,instead of running away. A similarity the protagonist and I have is that we are both caring toward our family,but what differs between us is that Gaia characteristic is heroic. Even though i haven't read far into the book,a quote that well describe my character is that "I'm glad to serve the Enclave." This quote is very ironic because Gaia is saying that she is glad to serve for the Enclave even though they took her parents and made Gaia do terrible things.

    BQ2-The Protagonist Revision
    The protagonist in my novel is Gaia Stone.She is a brave,independent person who also has a warmhearted side.In the book,she chose to go into the Enclave to find her parents,who were taken away,instead of running away to the Wasteland.Gaia and I are similar because we both would save the ones we love even if it leads to death. Although we are caring,we differ because Gaia is she speaks up for herself unlike myself. When Gaia was trying to save her mother she stated,"I'm all she has.If i can't free her,nobody will." This define Gaia personality showing that she is caring while being brave at the same time.

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  2. Grey Davis
    BQ4-Moment (FIRST TIME)
    A big moment in my novel was when Kayla was kidnapped and Drew's real feelings came out. "I never thought that Drew cared anyone but himself" shows that he never really showed care in love to anybody but Kayla, which adds to the story by making me feel like there is more emotions involved in this story.

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